From Memory to Memoir: A workshop with Janelle Hanchett

January 13 – February 17, 2024 

Saturdays, 9am-10:15am PST/12pm-1:15pm EST

“You think your pain and your heartbreak are unprecedented in the history of the world, but then you read. It was books that taught me that the things that tormented me most were the very things that connected me with all the people who were alive, who had ever been alive.” – James Baldwin

In the subtle words of my agent: “Nobody gives a shit about what happened to you. They care about what you make of it.” 

In other words, it’s the meaning we create out of the events of our lives that makes our story interesting, relatable, and worth reading. We turn our memories into a memoir. 

Memoir isn’t recounting the cleverest, most shocking stories of our lives, nor is it sharing a collection of brilliant thoughts we’ve formed over our years on earth. It’s about weaving the events of our lives into a narrative that shows something about the human condition. It’s about using real life events to draw greater truths, to bring people together into a shared experience through the page. Even if they haven’t lived what you lived, they have felt what you’ve felt, and our job as memoirists is to tell a very old story in new words, in a new way, in a way only we can.

James Baldwin said he thought his pain was unprecedented in the history of the world and then he read, and he realized his pain is what connects him with every human who has ever lived. That is, in my opinion, the point of all writing, including memoir.

Let’s be real: Unless we are Mick Jagger or that dude who had to saw his own arm off after it got stuck under a rock during a solo hiking trip, our lives aren’t interesting enough to just tell the world about it. Even our family trauma. Even that summer in Europe. Even that one really fucked-up cousin.

Memoirs are thematic. We choose events to say something about a topic.

We create a plot. We strip away that which isn’t relevant. We create characters. To me, a good memoir pulls me into an author’s life and head, and we travel along with her, hopefully ending up somewhere new. One of the worst feelings I have is when I close a book and think “What was the point of reading that? What was the author saying?”

I have spent ten years writing creative nonfiction in essays and blog posts, and I memoir called I’M JUST HAPPY TO BE HERE, which was published by Hachette in 2018. I have a BA and an MA in English and have taught writing at the college level.

I’ve been teaching creative writing workshops since 2014, and have led writing retreats both by invitation and on my own, but that’s all a bit of bullshit, isn’t it? 

The only way to decide if a writing teacher is for you is to read their work. So, please read my memoir, and if it appeals to you, let’s do this. 

 

So, what am I offering?

A six-week online workshop for the person who wants to write a memoir or has a draft they’d like to revise. In other words, this will benefit you whether you’re thinking of writing a memoir or have an abandoned one that needs direction, structure, plot, cohesion, narrative arc, fewer words, etc. And yes, I offer tailored weekly prompts for both groups (people with a draft and people without. I respond personally to each week’s prompt, building comments on what I’ve already read as we move deeper into understanding the plot, arc, and themes of your memoir. The weekly prompts are adjusted for people who have a draft and for those in the planning stages. In other words, this workshop involves a lot of 1:1 feedback. 

We will have six one-hour online video conferences, each centering on different topics.

Here’s what we’ll talk about each week, and the main questions we’ll be answering:

Week 1: Framing your story: What’s this memoir about? How do I turn this into an engaging story? What’s the meaning behind that story? (Or, why would people care?) At the end of this week, you’ll be able to articulate a through-line, what story you are telling, and, more importantly, what you’re trying to show and explore with that story.

Week 2: Writing about other people: Where do I end and you begin? Boundaries, fairness, and not infuriating the people you love. The questions I get more often than any others are: How do I write hard things about people I love? How do I not get sued? How can I write three-dimensional characters without violating others’ privacy?

Week 3: Dialogue & Character development: Writing yourself as a character. Writing loved ones as characters. How much do I share about them and my own life? What can be left out? How do I illustrate internal and external growth in myself and others? And how does dialogue reveal character? What about the recreation of scenes I can’t exactly recall?

Week 4: Structure & Tense: How do I structure this memoir? How do I write flashbacks? Do I use the present or past tense? Do I write the past with the voice of today, or do I let “back then” simply speak for itself? In other words, do I include the way I see things now or just write the scene as I saw it then? And how the hell does a writer make these choices at all? We will discuss different ways to structure a memoir, and how to get started figuring out what makes sense for the book.

Week 5: Pacing & Scene: When do I speed up the narrative and slow it down? How do I figure out which scenes need to be glossed over as back-story and which ones need development and detail? How do I move this thing along so my reader doesn’t grow bored?

Week 6: Voice & Tone: How do I not sound like a self-important, navel-gazing asshole? How do I get my personality in there? What’s the role of humor even in heavy topics? Why does my first draft sound like a 12-year-old trying to be clever and what the hell do I do about it? What will set my memoir apart from others?

Details:

January 13 – February 17, 2024 

Calls on Saturdays, 9am PST/12pm EST 

(weekly workshops are around 1 hour, try to leave 1.25 free)

Max enrollment: 8

Cost: €469 – €1499*

Please note that all options can be paid in installments, but option 1 is already set up, here.

Just email me to set up installment plans for options 2 and 3. Thanks!

Option 1: €469*

  • Weekly video workshops (recorded so you can keep the content and not miss anything even if you can’t attend one week)
  • Weekly “assignments” to build a structure for your memoir and guide you through the process of creating a narrative
  • Individualized, direct feedback on your weekly “assignments”
  • Private Facebook group where you can ask questions, meet other memoirists, give and receive feedback
  • An invitation to join a permanent online writing group of “Renegade Writers” (everyone who’s ever attended one of my online workshops or in-person retreats) 
Memoir Workshop, Option 1 - January 2024
€469.00

To pay in 3 installments, click here


Option 2: €559*

  • Weekly video workshops (recorded)
  • Weekly “assignments” to build a structure for your memoir and guide you through the process of creating a narrative
  • Individualized, direct feedback on your weekly “assignments” 
  • Private Facebook group where you can ask questions, meet other memoirists, give and receive feedback
  • An invitation to join a permanent online writing group of “Renegade Writers” (everyone who’s ever attended one of my online workshops or in-person retreats)
  • A one-hour, 1:1 video conference with me to discuss your memoir
  • My feedback on up to 5k words (~20 pages) of your writing
Memoir Workshop, Option 2 - January 2024
€559.00

Option 3: €1499* (FYI, this is a smokin’ deal. My manuscript reviews start at €1300, so…yeah!) 

  • Weekly video workshops 
  • Weekly “assignments” to build a structure for your memoir and guide you through the process of creating a narrative
  • Individualized, direct feedback on your weekly “assignments” 
  • Private Facebook group where you can ask questions, connect with other memoirists, give and receive feedback
  • An invitation to join a permanent online writing group of “Renegade Writers” (everyone who’s ever attended one of my online workshops or in-person retreats)
  • A one-hour, 1:1 video conference with me to discuss your memoir
  • Whole manuscript review: I will read up to 50k words (~200 pages) of your manuscript and offer feedback in a written document and/or margin notes in the following areas: 
    • Voice & tone, Narrative arc, Thematic development, Character arc & development, Dialogue, Rhythm & syntax (Please note that this is NOT a copy or line edit. Please email me if there’s any confusion about what this review entails. Happy to discuss!)
  • One month of follow-up email support   
Memoir Workshop, Option 3 - January 2024
€1,499.00

*REFUND POLICY: I offer a full refund as requested before October 5, 2023. From October 6, 2023, through October 20, I offer a 50% refund. After October 20, 2023, I cannot provide a refund. By signing up for this workshop, you are agreeing to this refund policy. Thank you!